I liked this story very much until the end. I think it would be much more effective if he never says outloud his desire to get together, but only implies it. Left unspoken, I think the ending would be much more powerful. Still a damn good story, Matt.
I liked this story very much until the end. I think it would be much more effective if he never says outloud his desire to get together, but only implies it. Left unspoken, I think the ending would be much more powerful. Still a damn good story, Matt.